Have you have been to Hamilton before?

In the holidays, my family. and I visited my friend's house they lived in Hamilton so my dad drove us there. My cousins and my friend came to visit them as well. I got bored and watched cartoon network. U watched the movie Johnny Test. Then we got bored and changed the movie to a sports channel.So we played with our phones instead.

When it was Lunch time we ate some dumplings and chicken. After we ate some food, we decided to play a game. We played hide n seek out side. Tristan and Dhon was playing as well.

When the game started Tristan was chosen so he was in. Dhon and I were running away from him I found a secret hiding spot. Later I felt that they couldn't find me so I ran out of my hiding spot.

5 hours later, it was almost night time so we  decided to play cards outside. When I threw the card it flew to my right and went missing so we didn't play cards after that. However, my dad and his friends wanted to play cards so they were asking “Where are the cards?” I replied “I’m sorry dad, I lost a card.” All he said was “It’s okay!” After that they used the joker card to replace the missing card so they can play the game. So the kids watched cartoon network and went to sleep.

When we woke up the next day, we got ready to go to the Hamilton park. There was lot of playgrounds to play in . First, I went to the highest slide. Then we went to the river. We had so much fun. After that we went to Mcdonald’s to eat ice cream. After we had our snack we all went to Hamilton flower park. It was so pretty and we took some photos. After taking some photos, before we went to bed. The next day, we packed up our things and ate some breakfast. After we ate we packed up and headed home.  When we reached home, I opened up my computer and played Roblox.

I feel sad for for Paul because he invited us all to got his house in December but my family had to work so we went in January instead I pray that my family would be able to visit his house earlier next time.

WALT understand and use the correct structure for a recount.

I know I can do this when I write the orientation, events and conclusion in order.