Nothing could prepare me for the next message that I found on my phone this morning.
This morning I received a dreadful and breathtaking text message from an anonymous entity that managed to get access friend’s phone named Durv. It said, “01010111 01100001 01101110 01101110 01100001 00100000 01101010 01101111 01101001 01101110 00100000 01101101 01111001 00100000 01100110 01110010 01100101 01100101 00100000 01100111 01101001 01100110 01110100 01100011 01100001 01110010 01100100 00100000 01100111 01101001 01110110 01100101 01100001 01110111 01100001 01111001” Which meant, “Wanna join my free giftcard giveaway” in binary. But it had a catch, Full of alien like font that means get a sacrificial subject and head to a particular sketchy place. Nowhere to be seen in Loogle maps. What made it more scarier today is 2017 and it was sent in 2069. “Does that mean aliens invaded the our terrestrial planet in the future?” I said to myself
I replied by saying with doubt and fear, “Sorry, but no thanks.” The out of this world entity and possibly an abomination said in full caps with tons of exclamation mark, “ H0W D4R3 Y0U!!!!!!!!!” The phone screeched with a distorted and unsatisfying sound. Me shrieking in fear immediately rushed outside killed one of my chicken and went to the living room.
I saw Durv drunk and unconscious from all the drinking. But dog paws foot steps found on top of the phone showing where the message were sent. “Hah, dumb dog. Although I killed this chicken for nothing, at least it’s nothing serious.” I went upstairs with relief and to the bathroom. I saw Keemstar our dog bleeding out! Me being a squeamish adult fainted in fear.
Gasp! “Ugh, I'm in bed? Guess it was just a bad dream.” I stood up and got my phone and saw the exact same messages. Then me being the curious George swiftly scurried downstairs to notice that Durv and the dog was dead!
To be continued!
Hello Ace. This story is really good. It was very interesting as well as sad and scary. This must of took you a while to write. I think you used your punctuation good and it made a lot of sense. Next time you could just end the story instead of to be continued because I wanted to keep reading but I could not, so just something to think about for next time. Well done Again. How long did it take you to write this? Great work.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the feedback, I'll try to write more complete stories for my future writings.
ReplyDeleteHello Ace, My name is Adi from Grey Main School. It just triggered me when you ran outside and killed the chicken + why did the dog have to die :'(. Anyway it was a great story. Next time could you finish the story so I can keep reading. Bye from Adi
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